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sooyoung ([personal profile] sooyoung) wrote in [personal profile] curledupkitten 2013-01-10 10:46 am (UTC)

I'm not even the biggest fan of chanho and you know how we like to poke fun at you with Chanyeol ships? Well I lied please stop writing Chanho at the very least ;~; the college cafe/bakery/cutesy food shop of some sort thing has been done so often I thought I was immune to it all, but you took some of the most meaningful scenes out of that setting and that threw things off in a very good way c: so i mean as you probably already know, congrats on doing a commonly used sort of thing and going new places with it!

my ONE piece of non-perfect bone to pick with this fic is the random appearance of ryeowook? I have no clue how that happened. maybe just bad reading on my part T_T

i thought for SURE it would be very forced-sounding if you managed to get a happy ending out of everything after a /wedding/ but you managed it pretty naturally c: they weren't even that tortured? is this going to be the start of something new (all the fluff?)

forever props for including all of exo subtly but why is yixing next to kris are you determined to torture me by mentioning fanxing even when it's not fanxing

sehun okay you have taken all the reasons i find him a bit peeving sometimes and somehow incorporated them yet reduced those not so happy sehun feels?

jongin is perfect i want all the high school girls to want him and then leave him the second they spot lu han and break his heart so he has a sad moment but the gang gets together to cheer him up and there will be actual EMOSHUNS wouldn't it be gr8

i don't really know what to say about suho. keeping the comments positive, i can't really tell how much of this is a self thing or if it's 100% fiction. but your joonmyun reminded me of myself? except he's obviously exceptionally brave and true to irl joonmyun (as far as we know). but i think he'll strike a cord with everyone who keeps secrets, not for their own sake but because time has filled them with one worry after another and it's so hard being weighed down until you can't even reach your dreams with no one to help, all the while watching your peers grow wings and take off and okay i'm going to stop.

now you know why i want to leave you voice comments instead please excuse the mess also GO. SLEEP. YOU.

i'm not going to mention happy christmas but i am merrily cackling at you

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