i read this yesterday and still don't know how to comment to it because it's just that wonderful i feel like nothing i say could ever properly express how much i love this. this is not just a fic, this is like a whole world that you have created and i felt so completely drawn into it that it didn't even feel like nearly 50k at all. i got to the end and went "nooooo it's done???? D:" so i think it's amazing that you were able to make ~50k feel short. XD
i loved everything about the characters and how they interacted with each other. the junmyeon-jongdae-jongin combo was spectacular and probably one of my favorite things about this fic. jongdae being the wonderful lady's man and caring bff, and jongin and his constant complaining about girls not paying attention to him to caring in his own special jongin way. they were so great. junmyeon...oh junmyeon, i love him so so much in this and i really like how you captured him as this leader-figure within his group of friends who carries too much on his shoulders and keeps it all bottled inside and doesn't want to burden anyone else with it. i really related to him in that respect which made this fic so much more idk emotional to read.
your chanyeol is so fantastic i think i fell in love with him as junmyeon did! i liked how he was the shadow leader and so like affectionate with junmyeon by calling him cute all the time (i loved all the cute-hyung and tiny-hyung name calling so much!!) and how straightforwardly he would say those things to junmyeon, it was very chanyeol-like. and i thought it was great how you were able to balance his sort of spastic-ness with his seriousness, with all the secrets that he kept hidden.
the chanho relationship was just so wonderfully paced. it didn't feel rushed or so slow, it was just right. their building friendship to junmyeon realizing he actually liked chanyeol, to chanyeol breaking up with sooyoung, and then the kiss!!! omg i died but then chanyeol is so stupid and avoids junmyeon completely, ugh, but i love how jongdae tells him to suck it up and come into work and then the whole scene with the two of them at the shop, chanyeol's "confession" omg it was so cute ;~; and the way he realizes junmyeon had a boyfriend, was jealous of sooyoung, and just goes him and kisses him again a;sldkj;alskdgas T__________T ugh i just really really loved this scene SO MUCH omg it was just perfect. ;_;
AND THEN YOU GO AND TRAMPLE ALL OVER MY HEART. all the cute chanho after they actually get together is so precious and made me so happy but then chanyeol's dad having a heart attack, chanyeol having to take over in his stead, chanyeol getting married...everything slowly just falling apart and my heart hurt so much when they broke up but especially with the way you wrote it, how junmyeon relates it to a trip chanyeol's taking, because somehow that just made it hurt more. ;_; and i cried when junmyeon finally, finally, broke down when they got the invitation to the wedding, i just T__________T and when junmyeon's mom died, i ugh, i just wanted to give him a big, big hug. chanyeol actually calling him made me happy but it was painful too, how he told junmyeon he misses him and T__T so many sad teary faces T__T T__T T__T
the whole "pretending" thing that chanyeol starts up omg, and chanyeol showing up at junmyeon's the night before the wedding, i felt so bad for the both of them at that point it was so painful ;__; and going through this again to make this comment is making me teary all over again i just sobs. but then junmyeon going back to school, meeting kyuhyun!! and slowly rebuilding the pieces of his life, it made the little cracks in my heart mend, too, and i was so happy for him, even though he was still so sad about chanyeol, and still so in love with him, and i was dying because i didn't know if there was any possible way for them to get back together or not. jongdae stepping in and telling junmyeon what he was doing with kyuhyun wasn't really fair, and being such an AMAZING bff ugh i really loved the jongdae/junmyeon in this i can't even express it. ♥ i love what junmyeon does with the notebook, and how it helps him figure things out and start to move on, how he gets the job at the university and INVITES CHANYEOL TO THE PARTY T___T and chanyeol just comes back and fits in almost like he never left sobs and it's so good, i thought it'd be just fine if they could manage to be friends and everything would be okay but then!!
the ending!!! i just. i don't have words. i think i cried through the whole scene omg but it was so wonderful i have nothing to say about it other than i lovelovelove it so much and i was so incredibly happy that they were able to make it, that chanyeol realized he couldn't do it and telling junmyeon that it's about time something was easy for him because yesssss T__T and idk idk have some keysmash because that's all i'm reduced to at this point: as;ldkgna;lskdg'as;dglasdg ♥♥♥♥♥
so. um. yes. i liked this. a lot. if that wasn't obvious by my really fail comment. T______T i feel like there's still 1219034809121 other things i wanted to say about this but i will refrain from making myself look more insane than i already have. but i really loved this. the whole world you created, every single character and all their relationships with each other, it was cute and funny and so so hurtful but the ending was so wonderfully satisfying that i just want to wrap it up and put it in a little jar and keep it with me always because ugh feels. i loved this so much. thank you for writing it!! ;____; ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
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i loved everything about the characters and how they interacted with each other. the junmyeon-jongdae-jongin combo was spectacular and probably one of my favorite things about this fic. jongdae being the wonderful lady's man and caring bff, and jongin and his constant complaining about girls not paying attention to him to caring in his own special jongin way. they were so great. junmyeon...oh junmyeon, i love him so so much in this and i really like how you captured him as this leader-figure within his group of friends who carries too much on his shoulders and keeps it all bottled inside and doesn't want to burden anyone else with it. i really related to him in that respect which made this fic so much more idk emotional to read.
your chanyeol is so fantastic i think i fell in love with him as junmyeon did! i liked how he was the shadow leader and so like affectionate with junmyeon by calling him cute all the time (i loved all the cute-hyung and tiny-hyung name calling so much!!) and how straightforwardly he would say those things to junmyeon, it was very chanyeol-like. and i thought it was great how you were able to balance his sort of spastic-ness with his seriousness, with all the secrets that he kept hidden.
the chanho relationship was just so wonderfully paced. it didn't feel rushed or so slow, it was just right. their building friendship to junmyeon realizing he actually liked chanyeol, to chanyeol breaking up with sooyoung, and then the kiss!!! omg i died but then chanyeol is so stupid and avoids junmyeon completely, ugh, but i love how jongdae tells him to suck it up and come into work and then the whole scene with the two of them at the shop, chanyeol's "confession" omg it was so cute ;~; and the way he realizes junmyeon had a boyfriend, was jealous of sooyoung, and just goes him and kisses him again a;sldkj;alskdgas T__________T ugh i just really really loved this scene SO MUCH omg it was just perfect. ;_;
AND THEN YOU GO AND TRAMPLE ALL OVER MY HEART. all the cute chanho after they actually get together is so precious and made me so happy but then chanyeol's dad having a heart attack, chanyeol having to take over in his stead, chanyeol getting married...everything slowly just falling apart and my heart hurt so much when they broke up but especially with the way you wrote it, how junmyeon relates it to a trip chanyeol's taking, because somehow that just made it hurt more. ;_; and i cried when junmyeon finally, finally, broke down when they got the invitation to the wedding, i just T__________T and when junmyeon's mom died, i ugh, i just wanted to give him a big, big hug. chanyeol actually calling him made me happy but it was painful too, how he told junmyeon he misses him and T__T so many sad teary faces T__T T__T T__T
the whole "pretending" thing that chanyeol starts up omg, and chanyeol showing up at junmyeon's the night before the wedding, i felt so bad for the both of them at that point it was so painful ;__; and going through this again to make this comment is making me teary all over again i just sobs. but then junmyeon going back to school, meeting kyuhyun!! and slowly rebuilding the pieces of his life, it made the little cracks in my heart mend, too, and i was so happy for him, even though he was still so sad about chanyeol, and still so in love with him, and i was dying because i didn't know if there was any possible way for them to get back together or not. jongdae stepping in and telling junmyeon what he was doing with kyuhyun wasn't really fair, and being such an AMAZING bff ugh i really loved the jongdae/junmyeon in this i can't even express it. ♥ i love what junmyeon does with the notebook, and how it helps him figure things out and start to move on, how he gets the job at the university and INVITES CHANYEOL TO THE PARTY T___T and chanyeol just comes back and fits in almost like he never left sobs and it's so good, i thought it'd be just fine if they could manage to be friends and everything would be okay but then!!
the ending!!! i just. i don't have words. i think i cried through the whole scene omg but it was so wonderful i have nothing to say about it other than i lovelovelove it so much and i was so incredibly happy that they were able to make it, that chanyeol realized he couldn't do it and telling junmyeon that it's about time something was easy for him because yesssss T__T and idk idk have some keysmash because that's all i'm reduced to at this point: as;ldkgna;lskdg'as;dglasdg ♥♥♥♥♥
so. um. yes. i liked this. a lot. if that wasn't obvious by my really fail comment. T______T i feel like there's still 1219034809121 other things i wanted to say about this but i will refrain from making myself look more insane than i already have. but i really loved this. the whole world you created, every single character and all their relationships with each other, it was cute and funny and so so hurtful but the ending was so wonderfully satisfying that i just want to wrap it up and put it in a little jar and keep it with me always because ugh feels. i loved this so much. thank you for writing it!! ;____; ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥